Thanks, @vmelvin & @eggman - I like your ideas and especially the one about keeping this in the ancient Greece style… Will give it a try if time permits! 
In the meantime, I’ve got another proposal from our graphic designer and it seems to be aligned with some of your suggestions. It still might need some trimming on the copy side, but check this out!
interesting that you have 2 Levels and i have seen 3 Levels so far 
This now has been moved to our SnapShot space, to ratify the Pillar DAO’s Idea-2-Proposal process by the signature and to test further our voting solution.
Come vote with your PLR here 
Snapshot
Great. Also, checking previous proposals, the trend so far is to set the voting period for three days.
